Alone in the Dark

It is midnight, time for people to go to bed.But for some of the city inhabitants, it is just the beginning of a new day.

I am walking slowly along one of the busiest streets of the urban area.Everything seems quite different from it was during the day time.The buildings, the statues, the river, the trees, the street lights, the rusty pipes, the empty bottles, all seem to be refilled with energy.A gust of wind passes by, leaving a line of pine trees whispering to each other:“Our time is short! ”“I'm awake, I'm awake...”Just like what always happens in a fairy tale.

“Nature is restless.”I walk alone, but never feel lonely, for there are always buildings, street lights accompanying me.Quiet and polite, they are like some well-trained servants.Being the only human being in this elf world, I suddenly have the feeling in my heart that the whole city belongs temporarily to me, which really gave me a lot of excitement.

“The music stops as if to answer an empty knock at the door....”This beautiful scene reminds me of the poem written on the wall of the Blue Casket.This night, dark, cold but restless, is just like the heart of a human being.

简评

阅读本文很容易让人联想到朱自清先生著名的“荷塘月色”。夜深人静，忙碌了一天的人们都上床睡觉了，甚至连动物们都终止了一天的活动。然而，“我”眼中的城市才刚刚苏醒，眼前的一切跟白天相比大相径庭，到处充满生机，一片欣欣向荣的景象。这城市现在只属于我一个人，我高兴，我快乐，我心满意足。但接下来呢？让人意犹未尽。后面与其说留下的是悬念、是联想，不如说是缺憾，因为好像写出的太少太少，未写的太多太多。所以这篇文章让人感觉不甚完整。

（点评教师：陈硕）

姓名：朱海阳

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