Part I Writing
Upon graduation, every college student is facing such a difficult problem as what to do next.Students' opinions differ greatly on this issue.
For some, they hold that there is no better way to get a decent job than working in a state-owned business, which would supposedly guarantee their life after retirement.For others, they believe a joint venture outweighs the former as it may provide a brighter future for employees. For me, I would like to work in a joint venture.
My reasons are as follows. First, to work in a joint venture means to stay in a metropolis after graduation, where there are plenty of opportunities and I can pursue my personal goals.Second, I prefer a speedy pace of working and the rapid personal development and growth, which can most probably be achieved in a joint venture.Third, I want to finance myself soon after graduation, so a high-paying job in a joint venture is what I expect.
In short, to work in a joint venture is what I choose for my career.
毕业之际，每一位大学生都面临着一个难题，那就是接下来要做什么。在这个问题上，学生们的观点有着很大的差异。对于有些学生来说，他们认为在国企找份体面的工作是最好的，据称这会使他们退休后的生活得到保障。而其他学生则认为，合资企业会给就业者提供更加光明的前途，因此胜过前者。对我自己来说，我想进入合资企业工作。
我的原因如下。第一，在合资企业工作意味着毕业后留在大城市，那里有很多机会，我还能追求个人目标。第二，我更喜欢快节奏的工作，以及个人的快速发展和提升，而这些在合资企业才最有可能实现。第三，我想在毕业之后即能自力更生，因此一份合资企业的高薪工作正是我所期盼的。
总之，在合资企业工作就是我的职业选择。
要点用法
upon graduation 毕业之际，在毕业时
a joint venture 合资企业
personal development and growth 个人的发展与提升
differ 有不同，相异
outweigh 胜过
decent 体面的
as follows 如下，列举如下
finance oneself 自力更生
state-owned business 国有企业
metropolis 大城市，大都市
high-paying 高薪的
guarantee 担保，保证
personal goals 个人目标
in short 总之，简言之
retirement 退休
speedy 快的，迅速的
句法点评
1.Upon graduation, every college student is facing such a difficult problem as what to do next.
本句主干结构为every college student is facing… problem。在such a difficult problem as…中，as引导的是一个定语从句，修饰先行词problem。
2.For some, they hold that there is no better way… than working… after retirement.
本句是一个复合句，主语是they, 谓语动词是hold, 宾语从句是there be句型。在这个宾语从句中含有一个比较结构：no better way… than…相当于最高级is the best way…；另外，句中which引导定语从句，修饰business。
3.First, to work in a joint venture means to stay in a metropolis…，where… personal goals.
本句中不定式短语to work in a joint venture是句子的主语，不定式短语to stay in a metropolis…是句子的宾语；在宾语中包含一个where引导的非限制性定语从句。
4.Third, I want to finance myself…，so a high-paying job in a joint venture is what I expect.
so连接两个表示因果关系的并列句，后一个分句中包含一个what引导的表语从句。